Kamusta po readers,
Between this week and last week my class and I made lovely narratives with the language features we have learnt from the last few weeks this term.
My story is based on me going to a zoo, losing my paper and getting myself into a hilarious situation with a crocodile. What I have changed after I have about 3 timers were I tried to make the paragraph as small as I could, then I turned the word ‘hugged’ into ‘I wrapped my arms’. After I did that, I re-read it about 3 more times.
I don’t want to spoil it so here’s my narrative,
As you can see I have added all my language features I know and made it as great as I could and I feel proud of it.
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