My Narrative

Kamusta everyone,

I will now be sharing with you my writing.

Today I continued with my writing. If you don't know what my story is mainly about me being in a big party, receiving a note and if you wanna know the rest please read my story

here is my work 

Narrative: Let’s Write
Beginning: Where is the character? Who is the character? What is the time and place where your story starts?	Main character is myself, I'm in a car with my friends. it’s 7:30 pm.   One night I was all dressed up with my bff’s in a limo because our other bff had achieved her dream (to be in the sky flying high.) When my friends and I came out, there was a red carpet waiting for us. As I was walking someone gave me a note that said, Tonight something BAD will happen, you are wearing something that could only save you. You will have to travel by something and grab the…. when you find it do NOT open it and Do not tell anyone!
Problem 1: What problem begins to happen? Don’t fix this problem yet...	Someone came and accidently pushed me and I dropped my drink and my note fell on my spilled drink.   I was holding and reading the note in one hand and I also had a drink on my other hand. Suddenly this drunk man who was older than me accidently came and knocked me. I instantly and accidently dropped my drink and my note (that I had also dropped) went on my spilled drink.
Problem 2: How does the situation get worse? Don’t fix this problem yet...	everything stopped working, lights turned, the music stopped, all the people started to faint except me.  all of a sudden while I was dancing ( I wasn't drunk) with my friends, all the lights, the sick music mostly everything stopped working. People were starting to faith, I knew that the note meant this. I was frightened, but I remembered.
Climax: What is the worst that could happen?	A portal shows up and pulls me into a dark, frightening different world.  Before my grandma died, she told me if I held on to the necklace and made a wish something would happen so I tried. something did happen, a portal showed up and pulled me in a world full of dark energy!
Resolution: What happens to solve the problems?	I found the object that made the Earth go wrong. Then someone hits me on the head with a rock and says go through the black portal.  I remembered what the note had said. Finally I found it! it was a box that contained something but the note said, when you find it you do NOT open it. OW! I rock hit me on the head, I turned around and looked at him. it was awkward for a minute but then he said go through that portal go now, NOW! I did what he said cause he sounded scary.
Ending: What happens at the end? How does everything work out?	everything went back to normal except I had to look after the thing or the universe will collapse.   As soon as I got back home, everyone woke up, and looked confused for a second why they were on the ground but the party must go on even if people are confused. After we left i still had the box with me.

idk what to say except hope you enjoyed my narrative.