Writing Time

Kamusta everyone,

Do you know what time it is? it is time for me to share my writing work!

Today I did a different narrative writing. But for today I had to plan it. It is mainly about me going to a huge party but while I was walking on the red carpet someone gave me a……

Here is the plan,

Narrative: Let’s Write
Beginning: Where is the character? Who is the character? What is the time and place where your story starts?	Main character is myself, I'm in a car with my friends. it’s 7:30 pm.
Problem 1: What problem begins to happen? Don’t fix this problem yet...	Someone came and accidently pushed me and I dropped my drink and my note fell on my spilled drink.
Problem 2: How does the situation get worse? Don’t fix this problem yet...	everything stopped working, lights turned, the music stopped, all the people started to faint except me.
Climax: What is the worst that could happen?	A portal shows up and pulls me into a dark, frightening different world.
Resolution: What happens to solve the problems?	I found the object that made the Earth go wrong. Then someone hits me on the head with a rock and says go through the black portal.
Ending: What happens at the end? How does everything work out?	everything went back to normal except I had to look after the thing or the universe will collapse.

I would say this is better than the other one I did before, or is it just me? please tell me what you think. Have a lovely day, bye!