Kamusta fellow readers,
Today is another day for me to share with you what I did in my writing today.
Who likes writing? I know I do. Do you sometimes write about something but accidentally forget to make a plan? Cause that is me however not all the time especially today since today I had to make a plan about a story that I made up
Here is the plan that I did
To be honest, I didn’t at the same time I did have an idea but I didn’t have an idea for a problem so I just did this. Salamat (thank you) for exploring my blog about my writing.
Kia ora Zahina,
ReplyDeleteI love writing too! I'm glad you enjoy it also. this looks like it will be an exciting story and I look forward to seeing how you develop it tomorrow.
There are a few details that you will need to add.
Here are some questions to get you thinking:
Is Layla in the car with anyone else? Is she sleeping in her car or driving to a friends house? Is she old enough to drive!? How does the kidnapping happen? Remember your problems don't need to be too complex.
Keep up the great work,
Miss D
Hello Zahina,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story that you made. I will do my narrative writing later.
Hello Zahina
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed looking at your blog. Your plan looks exciting, I would love to read your story when you have finished it. I am wondering what the kidnappers will be like and how you will describe their characters.
Hi Zahina it me sophie
ReplyDeleteI love how your posting more on your blog so people can commet and look at it.
I was wondering you could of add something like there 2 kidnapper and they tell there names it could be cool?
.Keep posting blog post i love you blog even more now since you post stuff now
From sophie your best friend