Brian and His Dogs... the story

Anyoung haseyo everybody,

Today a few moments ago this girl..(me) had continued with her writing!

Well you know now that I continued with my writing work but you don’t know which one I did but I'll tell you though and I did the story starter. Since I had finished doing the sick sentence and the question time, I added the info there to my story starter but I didn’t finish it because there was still the sentence challenge and I was kinda planning to put the info from there in the middle. 

Here’s the results.

Brian had often bought things from the market that had turned out to be the most outrageous, disappointing fakes. He had presumed that the magic biscuits would have been exactly the same. How wrong he had been.

One day while he was cleaning up the dirty dishes from the baking he had done and the pups were playing outside, a delivery guy had come and dropped off some treats for all of them. When he finally came outside to call in the dogs, he had also picked up the mysterious package. As he opened it the canines were chewing on the delicious meal that their owner had made especially for them.

The first thing he had picked up was a note that had said where it was from and it was from the shop were Brian buys his food for him and his adorable pets also if you do not know, that was the only shop that was near Brian's home since he lived kind of far from town and from his family.  The second object he saw was his treaty’s not the pups yet. They were mostly candy, fruits and lets say junk food too. But the last thing, the last thing he saw in the package was dog treats. He thought, since he hadn’t given treats to the dogs it wouldn’t hurt if he gave some now. A few minutes later hmm lets say 5, the adorable pups started to grow. They were watching a movie together with Brian so he knew right away he had to take them outside just in case they grew taller then the door or house. As soon as they grew larger than normal dogs would, Brian started to feel nervous that it would be a huge problem. 

3 days had past and thank goodness they stopped growing but Brian still looked worried. However since the day the canines started to grow Brian knew that it couldn’t be the food he had given them both because he usually feeds them the usual all the time and 5 minutes ago he had fed them something new and random. 

Is this interesting enough or is it a bit I don’t know a bummer?