Kamusta adults and students,
A few moments ago I did my writing and so now I will be sharing it with you.
Today I chose the story starter. If you don’t know what I’m talking about then well for writing I did something similar yesterday and I had to choose a section to complete and yesterday I did the sentence challenge. But today I chose the sentence starter as you know.
Here’s my writing all done,
It has been three months since it happened. It had been three months since she had seen another living soul. She had to be brave if she was to make it through. It had been 1 month since she had gone outside for a stroll until today she stepped out the door and left for a hike while footsteps followed behind.
She did not notice as she walked, the trees swayed from side to side. Every step she took she had seen animals sitting on the ground but still did not see how the trees went side to side as she wandered around.
The thing is, I actually combined the work I did yesterday to today's work and I didn't plan it either and also I only did this much because I don’t know maybe when I answer the other section I can continue it?
Hi Zahina,
ReplyDeleteThe imagery in your story is lovely and this is the perfect way to set a scene as your reader wants to know why the trees are personified. Are they magical? Is this a futuristic story? I was asking myself these questions as I was reading. You have captured my attention and I look forward to what you will do as you develop this some more. each of the different boxes help you to develop your story especially the question section. Another also encourages you to use descriptive verbs which have already included in these first few paragraphs.
Keep up the fabulous effort,
Miss D