Hello fellow folks,
(Thank you so much for looking at my blog post!)
Today I was choosing another part of my story to share with you what I did for writing. Well you already know that I was choosing a section to do for today and the one I chose was the, sick sentence!
Here’s the results,
The girl hopped through the peaceful woods. There were metal items laced on the pathway. She was terrified!
Is this alright? What would you add or change to the sentence?
Annyeong Zahina,
ReplyDeleteI like your more interesting sentences.
Miss D suggested an adverb. An adverb adds to a verb...like quickly,extremely,fast,most,carefully. So a verb is 'walked' and you could choose an adverb to go after the verb. Does this make sense?
I hope this helps. Have a good weekend and I'll see you next week :)
Kia ora Zahina,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fabulous blog post. You outlined the work set out really well and then presented it to a high standard. I especially like how you said 'items laced on the pathway'. Well done and keep up the good work!
Tash