Kamusta mga kaibigan ko,
(That means hello my friends and I’m thankful that you had come to look at my work)
Welcome to the place that I share with you what I do for my writing.
For today's lesson I did another SICK SENTENCE but in another story that I'll be sharing a little sneak peek once a day this week and I’m guessing only for this week.
Here’s my work in progress,
Is it great or is it not that good? Please tell me your honest opinion.
Muy bien Zahina,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have expanded your sentences. You have chosen some much more interesting words.
My helpful bit is a past tense word as English can be quite confusing. It would be "they need to be fed a lot of food."
I hope that is useful :)